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Here's a pencil test that I did in Flash for the purpose of practicing timing.

:bulletyellow: Adobe Flash Pro CS5
:bulletyellow: Wacom Cintiq 21UX
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Not bad at all for someone whose been away for so long! After watching this loop several times I can only really see small improvements that you can make here and there. Mainly with your anticipation and followthrough. Your squash and stretch are all very nice. However your demonstration of weight could be a bit more weighty. The bounce the character has when landing from that flip could use a little more emphasis. That emphasis could easily lead into anticipation for the characters "flash step"/instant transmission to his finishing "Link" pose. All in all I supposed that's about all I can say right now. You still have your understanding of timing, squash and stretch. Just put a little more work in your weight, anticipation and followthrough for your next one and we should see just that much more improvement. Nice work, show me MOAR and I will let you know what I see and what you could change/add/remove and tweak.
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